Detritus; “She’s so worth it!”
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EXT. ALIEN CITY – FIRST PLANET OF SEVEN ON THE LEFT – UNIVERSE – DAY
John stands in front of a swooping futuristic architecture, looks up at its long soothing lines.
John turns to his left. A long Alien passageway that leads into darkness. John walks towards the darkness.
INT. LONG ALIEN PASSAGE WAY LEADING TO DARKNESS – DAY
John runs full-speed towards the darkness.
JUST THEN
Light explodes in front of John, reveals a door.
John kicks the door open.
ALIEN TECH ROOM
John stands in the middle of a brilliantly lit space, looks around at what appears to be a tech-room.
John slowly looks around, appears to take it all in.
JOHN
“Hello! Anybody hear?!”
He turns to his right.
JUST THEN
Brilliant blue light fills the space. A huge metallic hand appears, suspended in the air.
A red glowing digital orb shoots out beams of blue light.
O.S. (off screen) Loud Voice; “MENE, MENE, TEKEL UPHARSIN.’
John spins around, looks up, looks left, looks right. He turns to the huge metallic hand suspended before him, glares at it, eyes daggerd.
JOHN
“Where is she you bastards?! Where is she?!”
EXT. ALIEN METALLIC-HILLSIDE – ALIEN CITY
John stands on a metallic-hillside, looks down at the tall jaggered points, sharp edges that go on for miles.
John turns to his right, sees a bright neon-lit doorway.
INT. NEON-LIT DOORWAY
John stands on a square moving platform that moves forward down the digitally neon-lit corridor.
V.O. JOHN; “I feel you.”
Vision of Morgan.
EXT. ALIEN GROUNDS – DAY
John walks intensely through Alien grounds, looks to his right, looks to his left, walks ahead with authority.
JOHN
“No more bullshit! I’ve got the deed! Lets make the deal! Come on you pricks! Lets make the deal!”
JUST THEN
An Angle appears in his path. John stops, looks up at the Angel.
V.O.(voice over) Angelic voice; “I am Micheal…..follow me.”
John stands, looks up in awe. He looks down, appears to ponder….he nods.
He looks to his left, sees an open door over by a metallic-mountain. Light beams through an open crack in the door.
John walks towards the metallic hillside, opens the light beaming door, enters.
EXT. 9TH DIMENSION – DAY & NIGHT
The Ninth Dimension ~ Creation of Form and Hierarchy. The ninth dimension is the galactic center, metaphysically described as a black hole that acts as the gravitational linchpin of our system.
John free falls through space.
John morphs into a superhero. He flies through Alien skies..
He see’s, ancient blimps and airplanes, hot-air-balloons and blue-crystal-Pyramids on, sky-islands.
John flies, descends down to his right, disappears.
EXT. 4TH PLANET IN FROM THE LEFT – UNIVERSE – DAY
John stands on what appears to be a frozen water-filled quarry with tall structured formations coming up out of the ground.
O.S, (off screen) Sound of, Falling rocks on hillside.
John appears startled. He turns to his right, see’s a red door in the shadowy rock formations. He studies the red door off in the distance, walks towards it.
RED DOOR
John stands at the doorway.
JOHN
“I feel you.”
He opens the red door…..enters.
INT. ALIEN CHAMBER.
John stands, looks down, appears anxious, sorrowful.
Morgan on her hands and knees, lit wax candles on her bare-back. She appears drugged, doesn’t notice, John.
JOHN
“Morgan!”
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